This was the first of our magazine review. We wanted a colour that would be suitable for boys and girls so they can both relate to it however we realised it looked dull and boring so for our second draft we changed the colour to red.
We also used the font Broadway for the title to grab the readers attention, however we then thought it should be changed to a more professional font which matched the text.
We had a picture that we felt showed the character Vicky, however it wasn't centered correctly and the background took focus away from her face. It was also a funny shape so it didn't use the space efficiently as it could have, so for the second draft we learnt from this and found a screen shot of Vicky which was centered and completely focused on her. This showed the audience who the film was about. We also chose a lighter image.
We originally had the pull quote at the end of the review, we decided that for our next draft we would move it to a more centered position as its important that people read the quote.
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