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PLOT: A young teenage girl is getting ready for a night that we think will be a fun night out. However, at the end we find a twist that she is not going where we think she is.

WHATS GOOD ABOUT IT: The emotion is shown very well and it has a real eye opener at the end. It makes you think of other aspects of teenager’s life instead of it being all fun and games. It gives a lot of insight into the quiet teen’s life.

This was the first draft of the review, however it was too short and didn't sell the film so we developed it to make a longer, more realistic magazine. This then sold the film better and we used this as an opportunity to help the audience understand the film.

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